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    Erik, this is great stuff. You have definately missed your calling. Like the other guys, I eagerly look forward to future chapters.
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    This is just as addictive as Marlin Rifles..
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    Where's them Hollywood producers when you need them? This is good stuff.
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    WOW!This is a great story and even better writing.You do have a gift.Now have you been thinking about this story awhile or are you making it up as you go along?You sure can paint a picture. JD
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    Re: Comments only on A Ficitional Tale by Eli Chaps..

    Quote Originally Posted by jackdaniels
    WOW!This is a great story and even better writing.You do have a gift.Now have you been thinking about this story awhile or are you making it up as you go along?You sure can paint a picture. JD
    Thank you, and again to everyone else.

    Truth be told I make it up as I go along. I'm sort of flowing along with the characters like everyone else.




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    Quote Originally Posted by Heavyduty
    Where's them Hollywood producers when you need them? This is good stuff.
    HA! With my luck some hack would pick it up and cast Dolf Lundgren in the lead! Oh the humanity...




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    I'm chomping at the bit to read some more. If it was all written and in paperback form I would have probably read it all by now. Great stuff.
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    Give him time. Give him time. Don’t rush good work in progress.
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    Re: Comments only on A Ficitional Tale by Eli Chaps..

    After reading all that, my heart is pounding. I can really get involved in stories like this and this is a good one. I can almost see it just as you are telling it. wheeoooh!!!

    Erik, you are a story teller and writer for sure, you better get some kind of copyright on this and make good of it !!! You my think about doing this for real and maybe you can make a bundle as well as inspire some people to learn and study. That is important, there maybe some youngsters out there that would cotton to a good story about good wins over evil instead of some of the trash that is on the book store shelves. All to often there are certain people who want to steer the younger generation into a dark and evil realm where evil is considered cool.

    Keep up the good work! I like it a lot!!!
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    Very gripping. Erik, if we had known you could write this good we might have hog tied you a long time ago. reflex264


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